Affect vs. Effect: Which word goes in this sentence?

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One of my favorite posts is when someone asked a doctoral professor the difference between using “affect” or “effect” when writing.

His advice sounds extreme, but really, I can’t blame him. 

Are these two homophones really so confusing? Short answer, yes. Consider this duo a pair of near-identical twins that enjoy pranking people by pretending to be each other, and then making you look foolish when you call them the wrong name.
There are very few words in the English language that make me believe they’re actively trying to mess with people, but these guys just give off that energy.

As both a writer and editor, the “affect/effect” debacle is something I stumble across often. In order to understand how and when to use each of these words correctly, it’s important to understand the ways in which they are different—despite how similar they appear on the surface. 

Affect: Ironically, if you look at the definition for this term from the New Oxford American Dictionary (NOAD), the first use term they list is, “to have an effect on; make a difference to.”
Effect: NOAD’s first term for this entry is, “a change which is a result or consequence of an action or other cause.”

These definitions might not appear to be helpful if you’re trying to consider the proper usage for this word in a sentence, but this actually conveys a simple—and important—difference that can help you use them more… 

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“Affect” is a verb—meaning it conveys action, or is influencing something or someone. It is an active word—something that is happening to the subject.
“Effect” on the other hand, is a noun—usually used to denote an outcome or concept—it’s the thing being impacted or the outcome or result.

As a wise person once told me: 
Affect = f*ck around
Effect = find out

The subject must be affected (e.g., impacted) to change the effect (e.g., outcome).

With this in mind, here are a few examples for how to know when to use affect or effect in your writing:

“Last night’s storm continues to affect many families, as downed power lines leave hundreds without electricity.” 
“Those affected by the storm can seek assistance at town hall.” 
—“affect/ed” is the verb used to denote the impact of the storm on families or people.

“The effects of last night’s storm continue to affect many families, as downed power lines leave hundreds without electricity.”
“Those still feeling the effects of the storm can call this number for further help.”
—“effects” indicate the results of the storm (e.g., the damage it caused) that is still impacting—or affecting—families.

“The effects of corporate profiteering on lower-income individuals can be easily tracked by shopping trends.”
—“effects” are the results being tracked.

“Consumers affected by corporate profiteering spend less money, and companies are starting to notice the economic effects.”
—“affected” indicates that it’s impacting the subject (consumers), while “effects” refers to the outcome (e.g., economic issues).

“You may experience side-effects from your new medication.” (effects=results)
“The medicine affects everyone differently.” (affects=impact)

Some bonus tricky examples you probably won’t run across frequently (but might be fun food for thought): 

“How long before the medication goes into effect?”
—“effect” is walking the sticky line between noun and verb. However, it is still more of a noun, given that it represents the concept of the outcome, which is whether or not the medication is working. 

“Everyone must be willing to take steps to effect change.”
—“effect” is used similarly to a verb. 

“The suspect maintained flat affect during the entire interview.” 
—“affect” more closely represents a noun, and is pronounced a bit differently: “aff-EKT” rather than “AH-fekt.”
This is because “reduced affect display” or “flat affect” is a medical term to describe “emotional blunting,” or the inability of a person to display emotions that should be present when speaking about topics that generally effect an emotional response. 

Hopefully, this helps clear up some issues, but don’t feel bad if you still confuse these from time to time. While I wouldn’t recommend avoiding affect/effect for the rest of your life, I certainly won’t judge you for choosing a different word!

Happy writing!

Trailblazer is coming this May!

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The first book in my Baptism by Fire duology, Trailblazer (which has been sitting collecting digital dust in my computer forever), is through final edits by the wonderful Jovana Shirley of Unforeseen Editing, and has been submitted for Kindle preorder!

It will be released on May 20, 2024 for both Kindle and Kindle Unlimited!

For the time being, I am focusing solely on releasing the Kindle editions for this series, but for those looking for paperbacks, they will be out closer to 2025. I plan on creating a duology boxset once both books are published so that no one needs to repurchase paperback copies once the boxset is available.
It will be a little while, but if all goes according to plan, the final product will be gorgeous.

This series is a little unusual, as it’s a departure from my typical style of writing and genres, since it’s my first fantasy western. It still leans heavily on fantasy elements, but it was really fun to create a non-Earth western novel, and even more fun having my amazing cover artist, Thea Magerand (who also did the cover for We Who Burn, so you KNOW it’s good!) create such exceptional art for it and its sequel, which is done and also ready to be published this year, after it goes through final edits.

I can’t wait to hear feedback for Trailblazer, and I hope you enjoy reading Dahlia’s story as much as I enjoyed writing it. I hope that everyone is staying safe out there, and happy writing!

Notice regarding my social media accounts

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I hope everyone is doing well! I have been spending some time this year stepping back from my social media accounts for many reasons, including health, and I’ve recently closed my Facebook/Meta and Twitter accounts.
Please note that as of this time, only this website and Amazon are still active.
I will be posting soon with updates for book releases in the 2023/24 year.

Keep reading, writing, and staying safe out there!

—Merethe

Recent releases and upcoming news for more!

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Greetings! 

It’s been a busy year for me so far, which is somewhat exhausting given that it’s not even March yet. I’ve had a lot of stuff going on, some good, some bad, so keeping up with my blog has been a chore I’m slacking on. 

But have you heard the good news? This one’s a two-fer!

The Devil & the Dreamer, the sequel to The Witch & the Wolfwood, released on January 31! Pick up your copy and find out what became of Iris and Helena, and what secrets get revealed about the true origin of Helena’s powers.

In upcoming events, Trailblazer, my novel with magic and gunslingers in a western-like land without mercy, is set to release soon, and I’ll have more information available in the coming months.

A little sneak preview from Trailblazer to whet your appetite: 

“Humans wouldn’t stop killing our kind. Verygg—you’ll learn about her in Whitebird Hollow—she was a powerful calamity. Split the land to make an impassable gap between us and them. Scorched the sky and broke the earth in two. Sacrificed herself to save all of witchkind.”

“Then how come witches don’t stay in Whitebird Hollow, where it’s safe?” asked Wini, perplexed. 

Dahlia’s brows drew downward. “Because when you build yourself a place of safety but you ain’t allowed to leave, that’s not a home—that’s a cage.”

How are your writing projects coming along?

I’ll be updating in a couple of months with some news about Trailblazer’s sequel, so stay tuned!

We Who Burn is available in audiobook!

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It’s been just over a year since We Who Burn, my epic necromancer fantasy, was released, and in that time it’s gotten a lot done!
On top of receiving a five-star award from Readers’ Favorite, it’s now also available on Audible, and it sounds absolutely amazing.
The even better news is that if you’ve already purchased the Kindle ebook version, you can get the audiobook for a discounted price (or use your regular Audible credits). I don’t know about you, but I love saving money, so I consider that a win-win. My narrator, Jonathan Waters, did an excellent job of bringing these characters to life and really giving them a three-dimensional quality, so I know you’ll love listening to him.

If you like magic, tales of revenge, steamy romances, and twisted gods, then you’ll definitely want to pick up your copy here, or purchase it through Amazon.

Happy listening!

Publishing Updates

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It’s been a while since my last post, and I’ve got a lot of news to share! 

The first is that I’ll soon be publishing a new duology: The Baptism by Fire series!

Trail Blazer is a weird fantasy western and book one of a duology, and my main character Dahlia was an incredibly fun person to write, so I can’t wait until you get to meet her.

The second big piece of news is the announcement of book two in my LGBT+ urban fantasy novel series, “Lies & Legends,” which focuses on Helena and Iris’s continued journey after the dire events of book one, The Witch & the Wolfwood.

The book, titled The Devil & the Dreamerwill be finished soon and should be available to order by the end of 2021 or the beginning of 2022, so you won’t have to wait long at all. 

And lastly, I was incredibly proud to have earned a position as a semi-finalist in the Writers of the Future contest first quarter of 2021 for one of my short stories. I got some truly humbling and inspiring advice on my work from David Farland himself, which was just an incredible experience. 

Keep an eye out for future reveals of book covers and release dates!

Publishing updates!

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It’s been a while since my last post, and I’ve got some news to share! 

The first is that my book Trail Blazer, will be out soon! 

Trail Blazer is a weird fantasy western and book one of a duology, and my main character Dahlia was an incredibly fun person to write, so I can’t wait until you get to meet her on release day. 

The second big piece of news is the announcement of book two in my LGBT+ urban fantasy novel series, “Lies & Legends,” which focuses on Helena and Iris’s continued journey after the dire events of book one, The Witch & the Wolfwood, which released March 30, 2021.

Book two, titled The Devil & the Dreamerwill be finished soon and should be available to order by the end of 2021 or the beginning of 2022, which means you won’t have to wait long at all. 

And lastly, I was incredibly proud to have earned a position as a semi-finalist in the Writers of the Future contest (first quarter of 2021) for one of my short stories. I got some truly inspiring advice on my work from David Farland, which was an incredible experience.

I hope everyone is staying safe out there! Keep an eye out for future reveals of book covers and release dates.

Pre-Order The Witch & the Wolfwood now for $2.99!

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While tracking down straying spouses is pretty typical P.I. work, tailing a woman who left her husband for a magic-worshipping cult is new.

Something about this case hasn’t felt right from the start, but Helena’s got bills to pay–magical beasts and murderous kidnappers be damned.

The Witch & the Wolfwood is going to be released on February 28, 2021!

If you order it before release day, you can get it for just $2.99. Get your copy now!

We Who Burn is out NOW!

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Happy Sunday! Can you start to feel that crisp autumn breeze in the air?

Whether you’ve spent your morning lazily sleeping in or getting your chores done, one thing you need to do today is get your copy of We Who Burn, which is out right this very minute!

Petra Freyrsdótter can raise an entire village from the dead with her magic—so why can’t she bring her lover back to life?

Petra has spent the last two years trying to resurrect Orrus, the man she loves. And even though she’s a powerful necromancer, nothing works, and Orrus is perpetually stuck as a listless shade at her side while she searches all of Aelamor for a way to restore him. 
But when Petra gets caught by a priest for the God of Truth and Light—an order that burns necromancers at the stake—instead of killing her, he presents her with a strange gambit: If she can retrieve a blade that was stolen from his order, the priest will not only let her live, but will also reveal what he knows about how she can fully resurrect Orrus.
Although making a deal with a burned brother isn’t a good idea, Petra is desperate and out of options. Apart from saving her own life, she must do what she can to fulfill her promise to Orrus so they can be reunited in the world of the living.
When Petra finally tracks down Caspar, the thief who stole the blade, she can’t help but feel attracted to and intrigued by the handsome stranger whose hatred for the order is as strong as her own. 
Everything falls apart, however, when Petra and her companions are captured by the mad priests who serve the God of Truth and Light and they discover the secret of the blade and the vile ritual the order intends to use it for.
Now, Petra and Caspar must work together to keep the blade out of the priests’ clutches and bring the entire order to its knees before it’s too late. And she must be willing to risk everything—including her chance to be with Orrus again—if she wants to make sure the horrible future the order has planned can never come to light.

Get your copy of We Who Burn for only $4.99 today!

New releases, updates, and more!

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I hope everyone’s been doing well given the circumstances.

Last month in July, it was my distinct pleasure to have my short story, “Precipitation” published in The Sirens Call 50th issue! If you’d like to read it, along with many other wonderful short stories, you can download a free copy here.

In other news, my urban fantasy novel, The Witch & the Wolfwood is going to be getting a cover soon, and I am beyond excited! This will be my first book with publisher Filles Vertes (FVP), and I’m looking forward to doing a cover reveal soon. This title, featuring smart-aleck private eye Helena Birch, will be available in April 2021, hopefully in time for an in-person return to JordanCon here in Atlanta.

Last year I had an idea for a story pop into my head, and it was so in depth that I plotted the book in about an hour and wrote it in a month and a half. Now, that very same book is coming out in just a few days! 

We Who Burn is a dark/paranormal fantasy novel about a necromancer trying to resurrect her lost love while being hunted by a witch-burning order with a world-destroying scheme in their sights. If you’re a fan of sword and sorcery, a kick-ass female protagonist, and a little bit of romance, then pre-order a copy of We Who Burn now! (You don’t even have to wait that long!)

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Until next time, stay safe!